In response to Friday Fictioneer June 8 2018
(https://rochellewisoff.com/2018/06/06/1-june-2018/)
"Who goes to a museum for a date?", he complained.
"Everyone in New York does", she replied.
"I like action, can't stare at inane sculptures", he groaned.
"If you understand the history behind it, you would find it as exciting as your Lakers game."
They entered the beautiful hall with the high ceiling. People were scattered looking at different artifacts. Parents were trying to keep their young ones' hands off the sculptures.
"Look at the beautiful centerpiece", she exclaimed.
He stared at the statue confounded. "I swear I saw the hand move."
"What?", she retorted looking back at the armless statue.
7 comments:
Oh, what a last line! Brilliantly done. :)
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
The start of something creepie! Nice one.
You never know about those things!!! Good job!
Dear Jaya,
He's a bit of trickster, isn't he? Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
And that's a good way to keep him interested in the museum... great fun.
Oh, well done! I think he gets the last laugh :)
@Susan, Thanks. Glad you liked it.
@Keith, Oh yes.. We all get creeped out but still are intrigued with creepy things.
@Courtney, Yes.. always a mystery. Thanks.
@Rochelle, Looks like he is. Thanks.
@Gah, Definitely.
@Linda, :)
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