In response to Friday Fictioneer, Apr 20 2018
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Spot looked around, whimpering softly.
His mom hugged with her paws, "You will be fine in your home."
"Yeah! It's fun to chase everyone", his brother bawled. "Especially the birds who live in that thing with chains around."
"Its called a cage, silly", his mom corrected.
"What is a cage, mom?", Spot asked.
"Its a container for pets not like us", his brother guffawed, "but I guess you only need a cup."
Spot saw a cage coming towards him. He started shivering and his paws became sweaty.
"Him", said the cute cherubic girl with cage like earrings looking at him affectionately.
10 comments:
Sweet story! I hope Spot enjoys his new home.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Look Jane! See Spot run!
(Only if you leaned to read in 1950's America will you understand, but this was my immediate reaction )
I'm sure Spot is going to be loved, nice take on the prompt.
Lovely take on the prompt.
@Susan E Earnes, I hope so too. Thanks
@Linda, :)
@Iain, I am sure as well. Thanks
@YarnSpinner. Thank you
Nice to read a story written from the point of view of an animal. Well done, putting yourself in Spot's place so well.
Delightfully different. Spot should be very happy.
A-Z of My Friend Rosey!
Dear Jaya,
Sounds like Spot is going to a happy home.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Lucky Spot!
They don't all get chosen...
@Penny Gadd, Thanks. It was fun to write from Spot's view.
@KeithRamblings, Wonder if Rosie will meet Spot one day ?:)
@Rochelle, I hope so too. Thanks
@Dale, I am glad too that Spot was chosen.. Thanks for stopping by.
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