In response to the Friday Fictioneer May 11 2018
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"I can't believe you did not think about this?", she exclaimed annoyingly.
"Wait, I am sure I will make it work", he said assuringly.
"You are expecting a treasury board having perfect eyesight to grant funds for developing cheap eyeglasses for $2?"
"This will be a huge hit in the developing countries. We would really help people to see."
"Sure, if you can get some help from the board", she replied gingerly.
He held the photograph and smiled," This will do."
On the photograph was printed, "Would you enjoy the Empire State if you saw it like this?"
12 comments:
I must admit I cleaned my glasses when I first saw the photo! An original take indeed.
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An original take and very well done indeed.
Original take on the prompt!
I like that take on the prompt. Refreshing to see the photo's deficiencies being used as the story's twist.
I liked that! Clever and different!
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Dear Jaya,
That should give the board something to think about. It makes me wonder how much of a markup there is on eye wear. The costs are outrageous. Good take on the prompt.
Shalom,
Rochelle
What a great take on the prompt... And pretty brilliant of them...
What a creative take for this prompt. Really brilliant.
Very clever take on the prompt.
I wonder too... but providing a inexpensive ways for people to see should be interesting...
Very unique take on the prompt. Well done.
Thank You All. It was fun writing it :)
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